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Second Chance (page 119) by DunaLonghorn Second Chance (page 119) by DunaLonghorn
That's a good thing to remember in life :)


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AKBerry Featured By Owner Edited Aug 19, 2014
Merle's expressions are wonderfully done. Grammar correction: "We only can accept those things, and do our best to live with them" is sort of correct. Grammatically the wording is fine, but it is awkward. "We can only accept those things and do our best to live with them." Professional authors often place a comma just before an 'and' in a sentence, but there actually isn't supposed to be one. The only exception (that I know of) is American English grammar. Everywhere else (again, so far as I know) that has English as their first language uses British grammar rules.
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DunaLonghorn Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2014
fixed! I don't remember seeing the comma after "and" when I used to read in english :) We learned at school the british grammar rules also. 
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GuraKruor Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh my, who is the mysterious person from panel 1 who gave Merle that advice? Poor Merle, all this time at his side and like both of them could never move on TxT
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DunaLonghorn Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2014
hehehe well is Millerna...maybe she looks a bit different in that panel? I tried to make her picture to look a bit vague
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Rad1986 Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
So... the three of them are in the same room while Merle says this? Does Millerna even know that Merle had a sort of crush on Van and is having some trouble with Hitomi being back and involved with Van?

There should either be a comma or a semicolon between "battles" and "our." I'm not sure which punctuation you want, though you do want one of them. I honestly don't think it matters which one. :P "Helping" should also be "help."

~*~ Rad
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DunaLonghorn Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2014
I'm not sure if I fully understand your first sentence. Three? who? Millerna, Marlene and Merle (woah the three "M" :D)?
About Millerna knowing about Merle's secret...we'll go back to that detail later! Maybe Merle explained everything to Millerna when she began crying, or maybe Millerna has been Merle's friend and confident during these years, or maybe Millerna "sees" that Merle has a crush on him...;)

About the comma, I'll fix it in a minute! argh and I really read and re-read the text this time T_T
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Rad1986 Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Whoops, I forgot about Marlene. My confusion is where is Hitomi during the Millerna-Merle conversation? After Hitomi and Van were interrupted, Merle meets with Millerna and Marlene... So where does Hitomi fit into that?

~*~ Rad
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DunaLonghorn Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2014
in the forest, with Van. The conversation between Merle and Millerna happens after Van and Hitomi fly away and leave Merle at the market (page 84-85), that's why Merle storms into the castle angrily (page 115) ;)
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Rad1986 Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Oh, oh oh oh. I didn't realize it was going on while V and H were having their chat. I thought it was after. My bad!

~*~ Rad
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alandria7 Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2014  Hobbyist
GROUP HUG TO MERLE T____________T
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